I finished reading the book on August 1st, but I
refrained from writing my review until now so I would be able to have gained
some perspective. I picked up Breaking
Dawn without any preconceived notions, and I believe this
was key in my genuine enjoyment of the book. I steered clear from the spoilers
that were leaked onto the Internet; the only knowledge I had of the book was
the first chapter that had been released in Eclipse.
When I flipped to the first page, I was fully willing to be taken wherever the
author wanted me.
There were a few elements of the book that stood out the
most to me. First of all, it is clear that Stephenie is a fantastic writer. I
witnessed a lot of growth in her writing from when she first wrote Twilight. Stephenie has clearly
progressed as a writer, and that makes me eager to open any of the other books
she has in store for us! Another key part of the novel that I enjoyed was the
positive message about the importance of love and family. Introducing a child
into the equation was the logical development of the intense love between
Edward and Bella in the first three books and the marriage at the beginning of Breaking Dawn. The fact that Bella’s
special gift as a vampire was a shield was perfect for her character; Bella has
always wanted to protect those she loved, often in the way of a martyr when she
was still human. I also enjoyed Bella being able to sidestep the crazed
bloodlust of being a newborn. It was wise of Stephenie to do this because
readers probably would not have enjoyed reading a year’s worth of Bella aching
to suck the blood of her father!
Overall, Stephenie Meyer did a spectacular job of tying
together most of the loose ends and giving all the characters we have grown to
love a happy ending. However, the book was not flawless. Firstly (and least
importantly), there were a number of grammatical errors that could become
distracting at times. It detracted from my reading experience a bit to see that
the editing had been sloppy. It is understandable, though, given the time
constraints there must have been.
Furthermore, while I was very pleased that the ending was
one I could smile about, part of me thought that there were a few too many
butterflies and rainbows. After Bella was changed into a vampire, she suffered
little, if any, consequences for her final decision. Throughout the previous
books in the Twilight saga, Bella struggled with the decision of becoming a
vampire versus remaining human. Edward questioned whether or not she would have
a soul and if she would go to heaven. Bella also knew that she was going to be
bloodthirsty for years as she learned to control her intense craving for human
blood. When Bella made her decision to
be changed, she had accepted the fact that she may never be able to see her
parents again. Bella also had accepted that she would be severing her
friendship with Jacob Black when she was changed. But Stephenie erased all of
the suffering and consequences that Bella was supposed to face and this
frustrated me a little.
The last thing that bothered me a little in the book was the
excessive use of a few choice words. Honestly, I don’t know how many times
Edward “chuckled” but it was certainly more than I would have considering the
grave circumstances at times. Of course, Edward also chuckled a good deal in Twilight, New Moon, and Eclipse.
There were a few other common words such as flit, bell (referring to either
Bella or Renesmee’s voices), and “he raised his eyebrow.” There were a number
of other popular words in the book, as well, but I won’t waste any more time
talking about them. I’m sure some closer editing would have eliminated the
frequency of some of these words. This wasn’t as much of an issue in the
previous three books.
All in all, I was very pleased with Breaking Dawn. No, it wasn’t perfect, but there was no way
Stephenie Meyer could have pleased everyone. Imagine how many readers she was
writing for and the pressure that undoubtedly came with the responsibility to
write such a book! Overall, the writing was top notch, the characters were as
real as ever, and I was able to close the book with a smile on my face with a
feeling of hope.